Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!

100% finished! Finally! Phew @___@ <3
How comes the others? C:

gaah

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haven't been working on them these two days, so... all i have is this and two more sketches

Ohh I see o wo ~

Here's a suggestion for you: Try drawing it on a separate file all together and make the image bigger (I liked the size of the battle poses for example) so that it's at a high resolution and then upload them to dev art so I can download them, colour and then resize. It'll end up looking better quality and it'll give you more room / space to work in as well. Especially if you haven't really been working on them, then it's not like you'll have to scrap much or anything really.
I only ask we do it this way because it's just a lot easier and probably a lot better in the long run and it'll give you more space to work and more space for me to colour them all in and then I can just add them to the sheet when I'm writing the information for the sheet and what-not. It'll also give you a bigger canvas to really practice the characters faces and the style of Aya Shouoto that I'd like HnK to go for. But it'll also help because the pages themselves are going to be quite big and it'll probably just give you overall better practice.

But, if you prefer drawing them smaller, then keep drawing smaller XD This was just a suggestion, you don't need to take it.

O:

THAT would help SOOO MUCH
But since I don't really work much with these programs, I didn't think it'd be possible for me to draw on different canvases... Actually the small size was hard to work with.. it's difficult to get much detail in, especially in the face, but it's easier to draw bigger things precisely because of that too. When I was drawing Shun's character sheet, it was really hard to draw the eyes since I basically only had enough room to draw one line across...
I shall do that then!

-starting over-

And I really liked the style of your battle poses so <3 If you could recreate that look * o* I'd be a happy happy girl, haha~ <3
But yeah I think it'll be easier for the both of us if its bigger for sure. C: <3

http://kuroihanetenshi.deviantart.com/art/Kaori-Character-School-Uniform-221019220

how is it? >_<

LOVE IT~ * o^
ksdfbskjbgjsbgskjgb <333
Love it so much LOL. Goshi its perfect.
Except maybe thin / slim out the face a little bit?

Her face?? I don't think it's fat? >_< I'm not sure which part you're talking about.. The right side?

I forgot to erase a line (the very top of her left leg, where it goes into the skirt)

Should her socks be longer, or is that fine?

Yeah I meant the right side. Though o wo the more I look at it, the more I like it LOL so just keep itt~
As for her socks, make them a little higher, yeah. She barely shows any skin at all, so maybe just a slight inch of skin would be shown

done with edit. http://kuroihanetenshi.deviantart.com/art/Kaori-Character-School-Uniform-221019220

TY~ C: Gonna start colouring it now. n wn <3

XD you work a lot faster than I do

So... question for her normal clothes.

it says here... "you can find Kaori in a cardigan or a simple tank top" << the tank top would require her showing skin. How is that supposed to work? Is she alright with showing her arms, but not her legs?

Yeah XD she's not fond of showing her legs unless she's swimming. XD

Is this style alright for Kaori? >_<


https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/15/08/33/56/kaori_11.jpg

O_________________O
YES~ LOLLL <33333

Anything to fix?
DX
https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/15/08/33/56/kaori_12.jpg

Not that I can see, nope~! o wo <3

Alrighty then.
I shall upload to DA then.
http://kuroihanetenshi.deviantart.com/art/Kaori-Character-Normal-Clothes-223245469

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/194/4/a/kaori_normal_wip_by_ribboncouture-d3pigem.png Work in progress colouring @____@ Wooo~

Wow o_________o
I'm actually mesmerized by that image.
/stares at forever

Done
Is the blade too watery?? >_<

D: I forgot to erase a line (her right leg, where it overlaps with the right back ribbon)
If there's nothing major to fix, can I trouble you to erase that? the large file took FOREVER to upload

Wow *_____________*
I'm so impressed XD haha
I feel like you've gotten better with even just a little bit of practice
You amaze me everytimeee. T_T I'm so jealous of your skills

And no worries I can easily fix it~! n__n
I'm going to get started on colouring since I'm all motivated now.
By the way, the blade looks great n wn

Which character are you going to be working on next?

>///< I'm not really that good. I'm just good at bluffing and making it seem nicer than it is.

uhm... I remember you said to finish these first:

- Sasaki Haruki & Mikazuki Aigyoumaru
- Wakahisa Kimiko & Daiki
- Chibana Kaori (done)
- Takenaka Shun (done)
- Kawaguchi Shouta
- Tsunoda Susumu
- Tokimouto Michio & Hidoi and Sugoi

is there any one in particular you want to see right now?

Having Kimiko next would be great~ n wn
After that you can go in whichever order you'd like.
I keep scrapping the script and redoing it XD;; so, there's no real order of which characters appear first anymore
so it doesn't matter much in general.