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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Thu Jul 07, 2011 4:52 pm

Can you tell me what's wrong with this image?? It seems kinda OFF for some reason..
My sister said her legs are too long, but she's supposed to have long legs. are they TOO long? Or is it something else...?
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Thu Jul 07, 2011 5:36 pm

Yeah I think they're a little TOO long o wo
Try shorting them a little bit by using the free deform tool (I think photoshop has one) o wo <3
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Thu Jul 07, 2011 5:58 pm

Slightly better?

But I feel like her bottom half has less shape now.. D:
and it still doesnt seem quite right..
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:07 pm

I'm not sure what it is to be honest.. D:
I think it only looks a little bit off and not a whole life off.
I think it's okay the way it is now. o wo
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:03 am

We now officially have an Eaarth, his information will be put up sometime later today!
Btw here's the information on how everyone personalizes and wears their school uniforms

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MALES
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:33 pm

D:
I was working on the drawing early this morning (before you posted) and already had Shun's uniform done according to the profile on Gaia, which is a bit different from what you have. (Her skirt is ankle-length, and she wear short socks which arent really visible since her skirt is long, and sneaker-like shoes) I can correct it though. In fact, I'll do that right now. The long long skirt is harder to draw with a tablet anyway.

What about shoes for everyone? Everyone wears the same shoes?
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:48 pm

Uhmm, for the shoes I was thinking the school would have loafers that are gray. They don't HAVE to wear those shoes though, but most of them probably do, except for Kimiko who wears boots at pretty much all times. XD Kimiko's boots can be ankle high or a little higher. Whichever you want to draw. C:

Which reminds me. The RP was closed so that I could work on the actual manga, so if you still want to look at the profiles or read the RP for more information that's fine, but chances are the information I give you here will be more accurate since the RP is no longer continuing.
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:55 pm

Ohkaays. I just liked to look on the RP 'cuz it had pretty much every detail of the character on one page.
So I guess I should change her shoes too
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:58 pm

No worries, just thought I should alert you XD
Didn't want you to get mixed up or confused C: <3
But, yeah we've also got a Mars and a Ceres and an Earth so I'm updating the concept art list and the character page.
Also updating the school uniform thingies so that you've got all information. I'll put it all in the first post of this thread so it's easier for you to access
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:04 pm

Alrighty~
Thanks for doing that ^^ I don't even know where all the other info stuff are in these pages, but I have them copied and pasted to Word.

BTW, Shun looks really different for some reason.. The first picture she had her bangs down and hair tied up, but the second one I tried to draw the bangs tied in a bump and hair down, and it looks pretty much like a different person.. Maybe I just fail.
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:07 pm

o wo Show me? <3 XD I'll help you fix it, if there's anything to fix~
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:33 pm

I don't know if this is going to work XD BUT~ try making the eyebrows on the first one as pointy or as dramatized as the ones on the second picture. Like, how her eye brows have that pointy arch as if the cosmetic woman shaped them that way. That miiight do the trick. If that doesn't work try adding some more detail to her eyes, like a certain feature like a sharp point at the corners like this or something. If THAT doesn't work, try making the bangs that frame her face in the first one a little longer and have them curl inward a bit. If THAT doesn't work XD;; thennnn try making the pony tail on the first one a little bit thicker as well, since in the second one her hair looks pretty thick. o wo if all else fails, try 'em all together and see if that works! XD /brick'd
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:49 pm

ok. I'll just do some experimentation with that and see what happens.
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:26 pm

I think it was mainly the hairstyle
I did some of the stuff you advised:
https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/15/08/33/56/shun_c20.jpg

I just erased the bangs and put her hair down, and I dont think it looks like a different person now.
https://i.servimg.com/u/f48/15/08/33/56/shun_c21.jpg

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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:27 pm

: D I like the second one a lot! Looks perfect -thumbs up-
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:45 pm

Oh, just a quick reminder when drawing the outfits: Don't forget to draw the actual gray vest that goes ontop of the under dress shirt. Shun's is fine, you don't need to draw her vest because she's rebellious anyways XD Just don't forget for the other girls and remember that Kimiko wears a blazer C: <3
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:25 pm

hm.... so should i just leave her hair down? I kinda want to just cuz it makes her look.. more alike.
But then if we tie her hair up for her transformed form, then people might not recognize her. The point of that thing I did with the hair was just to show that the hairstyle is what made her look different.

and yes ^^ thanks for the reminders, but I haven't even finished one character sheet yet. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:28 pm

Haha, I know, but it tends to slip the mind, hence the reminder.

Hrmm~ Maybe just leave her bangs up in all forms? For Heishi Form when its up in a pony tail her bangs could still be in the bump and it'd hopefully look like the same character XD
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:30 pm

By the way, Whimsy (the creator of Shun) says she loves the sheet and how Shun looks C: <3
She also suggests that maybe for the school uniform one, you could have Shun's whole hair down and then for Everyday wear, have the bump (like you have) and Heishi her bangs could be down and her hair in a pony tail. o wo ~ That way it shows the different hairstyles of Shun and also gets the point across that she probably looks a bit different with her bangs down XD
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:44 pm

whoo~ Praise from the creator herself~
Good idea! I definitely want to show her with those different styles, but I didn't want it to make it seem like it was a different person altogether ^^ You guys helped a lot with the suggestions <3 I'll go change it now~
I think I'm gonna change the design for the hammer a bit though >_< When I get to it.
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:53 pm

No problemo~! C: We're here to help and guide you into the right direction n wn <3
I'm about to update the front page in like... 15 minutes~! I'll alert you when I've updated C:
Or I'll change the thread title XD
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:20 pm

XD It's okay. I still need to finish drawing the uniform. Just the shoes left though. I finally fixed the hair, and then I need to resketch the third pose so I can draw her with the hammer.
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:21 pm

Awesome C: I look forward to seeing it when its all finished * o* <3
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PostSubject: Re: Hachimitsu no Kissu Plotting (Private) UPDATED!   Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:05 am

Front page finally updated @____@;
Gonna add links to the actual sheets itself tomorrow when I'm not exhausted.
TIME FOR BEDDDD~
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